Pleasant but recognisable
I enjoyed listening to it, but I found the loops you used instantly recognisable. In the same way that I'd criticise an artist for using a very obvious photoshop filter, I must criticise you in the same manner. I don't believe the way you used the loops added anything to them, you simply put your favourites in a row.
May I encourage you to start recording your own sounds, even if they are not necessarily 'musical' and start playing around with a unique sound. Something original.